Wk 4 "Wimba": Peer review

Here is what Jeri Kennedy said about my article. I really was lost and am grateful for her expertise.

"I liked the ideas you presented but made some changes using Track tools in Word. You are able to see all the comments and changes I thought of when you open the file.

I thought it should have a brief summary of the lit review but focus mainly on the research itself and most of the comments and changes reflect that idea. I think you need a LOT of details when describing your project and results - you are trying to publish a paper based on your research rather than the lit review."